I never did finish my week of babyless posts. that's okay. nothing special happened, really. i cleaned the house and got the Guide all put together the way it's supposed to. now to finish it.
Today i finished Sense and Sensibility and i had nothing to read afterwards (or i didn't wanna go back to Uncle Tom's Cabin) so i pulled out a sheet of paper and wrote down one of those things that's been rattling around in my head lately. it relates to the Pilot. and it sort of opens up a new avenue for me to go down to make that a better story. it needs to be better.
it's just a short conversation between Nesris and her owner/brother/prince Nasinair. I only mentioned it once and only in retrospect the fact that even though Nesris was a slave Nasinair treated her well, almost as a confidant. i think going back and revealing more of her life as how it used to be will add to the story... give Nesris and Dartia a little bit more time in the beginning... And i also have a new idea about why and how she escapes. the first one was clunky. this one is better.
So i'm gonna dig out that binder and take it to work tomorrow.
now i have to go do my at home job. a file from hell. i just want to finish it but i don't want to work on it.
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